Severed Sun

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A sun split open above the salt plains
(塩の荒野の上で太陽が裂けて開いた)
Its light spilled in ribbons across the cracked stone
(その光は砕けた石の上にリボンのようにこぼれ落ちた)
Children of ash drew circles in the dust
(灰より生まれし子らは、塵の中に円を描き)
And waited for the sky to forget its name
(そして天がその名を忘れるのを待っていた)

遠い熱が消えてゆく
(The distant heat is fading away)
影だけがまぶたに残る
(Only shadows remain upon my eyelids)

Severed Sun we carry your broken fire
(断たれし太陽よ 我らはおまえの砕けた炎を抱いて進む)
Through the blackened fields where silence learns to sing
(沈黙が歌を覚える 黒き荒野を越えて)
Every shard of day is a blade in the wind
(昼の欠片のひとつひとつが風の中の刃となる)
We walk on the edge of the vanished dawn
(我らは消え失せた夜明けの縁を歩む)

Old altars leaned under the weight of crows
(古き祭壇は群れる烏の重みのもとに傾いていた)
Their bells long buried in roots of iron
(その鐘はとうに鉄の根へと埋もれている)
We gathered sparks from a ruined chapel roof
(我らは廃れた礼拝堂の屋根から火花を拾い集め)
And stitched them into cloaks for the nameless road
(それらを名もなき道をゆくための外套へと縫い合わせた)

焼けた祈りを抱いたまま
(Scorched prayers held close in the arms)
明日を探す足音が響く
(Footsteps resound, searching for tomorrow)

The horizon folds like a torn banner
(地平は裂かれた旗のように折れ曲がる)
Hammers of thunder grind the bones of noon
(雷の槌が真昼の骨を挽き砕く)
March through the dust and make the silence bend
(塵を踏みしめ進め 沈黙を屈させよ)
No mercy left for the crown of noon
(真昼の王冠に与える慈悲はもはや残されていない)

Let the dark remember what the fire could not keep
(火が守りきれなかったものを 闇よ覚えておけ)

Severed Sun we carry your broken fire
(断たれし太陽よ 我らはおまえの砕けた炎を抱いて進む)
Through the blackened fields where silence learns to sing
(沈黙が歌を覚える 黒き荒野を越えて)
Every shard of day is a blade in the wind
(昼の欠片のひとつひとつが風の中の刃となる)
We walk on the edge of the vanished dawn
(我らは消え失せた夜明けの縁を歩む)

Severed Sun ignite the wound in the sky
(断たれし太陽よ 天の傷口に火を灯せ)
Let the last rays fall like vows across the stone
(最後の光よ 誓約のように石の上へ降り注げ)
From the ruin we raise a colder flame
(廃墟より我らはさらに冷たき炎を掲げる)
And wear the night as our new halo
(そして夜を我らの新たなる光輪として戴く)

Prompt

Create a cathartic symphonic melodic death metal track at 228 BPM with a severe solar apocalypse mood. Open with a blazing lead motif over distant choir and low organ drones, then explode into double kick driven gallops and razor tremolo guitars. Keep the verses tight, biting, and propulsive, with guttural vocals and occasional harsh layered shouts. Let the pre chorus widen with clean harmonies and rising strings that feel like light breaking under pressure. The chorus must be huge, anthemic, and tragic, built around a memorable singalong hook and stacked choir that feels both victorious and doomed. Add a dramatic midpoint breakdown with subsonic chugs, timpani impacts, and a collapsing brass line, then lift into a final chorus that feels like the last blaze before extinction. Use cinematic orchestration, icy reverb tails, precise low end, clear vocal focus, and a sharp modern mix that keeps every hit urgent. Make the ending feel like a shattered hymn rising over a ruined horizon.